Girl

Posted: October 25, 2016 in Uncategorized

She sits alone like she always does. No family comes to visit, no soldiers for religion, not even a doctor anymore. Just the men who bring her food, and that’s only done on occasion

Nurses used to try talking to her though, but that only lasted a few days. It would seem to an outsider that this was an extremely mistreated young woman. Quiet, unassuming, a Blank face that had cried out all its tears long ago, she waited on her metal hospital bed for malnutrition to take her into whatever plane of being might exist beyond this one.

But in actuality, the real reason no one seems to love this girl is due to her fixation with biting our eyeballs and sticking her fingers into their brain matter. Just like she did to her family. 

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Comments
  1. Well, I wouldn’t like her for that reason either 😳

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  2. Nice twist at the end! ^_^

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  3. Seems she’s been mistreated yo me. Love to get deeper into her brain
    Wait..nevermind, ver timely

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    • Lol. You either wanna help her or give her a taste of her own medicine (fingers….brains…lol). I agree I think she was probably mistreated from a young age. But it’d be even scarier if she was just BORN evil and always had a loving family until she killed them. I know that’s not realistic at all though.

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  4. Alex says:

    This is great! Creeped my out at the end, but it’s so good!

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  5. Sue Smith says:

    I’m still laughing at the way you worded it. But it’s really not a funny story–it’s SPOOKY! Just in time for the “season,” if you want to call it that.

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  6. Aquileana says:

    A quite unexpected ending… o_O Well achieved counterpoint!…

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  7. Yiikes. Ha ha. Oh my. What a great set up!

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  8. Joel F says:

    Such an enjoyable read. Thanks Shane for sharing this.

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